The Official Writing Challenge
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Well written, surprise ending, nicely done!
Ah ha!! Very clever! In retrospect it all fits together, "which of us would be the most popular on any given day" and your other hints. :) I enjoyed this!
I enjoyed reading the story. Even though I knew the story wasn't going to have an obvious ending, it kept me intrigued because I didn't figure out what it was about until the secret was revealed at the end.
Very interesting! Who would have thought it was about an old carousel! :) You have a very descriptive style of writing, and I enjoyed your story!