The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the servant's heart of the caregiver and the "silent" voice of the patient. Your message is clear and wonderful.
Oh, this is marvelously done. Love Greta--and what excellent characterization of this woman in a coma. So creative.
Wonderful and moving piece. Loved the caregiver! Well done!
Ohh, I love this piece and the caregiver! Written from a love-filled heart. Outstanding! Intense! I felt like I was in the room. Truly an inspiration. Masterful writing.
You have revealed the plight of the coma patient. If only people would treat loved ones with this kind of love, whether they are in a coma or not. What a refreshing entry this is for my spirit.