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Topic: (01/01/70)
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Jan Ackerson
01/31/09
Very powerful!

I felt that the mention of the birthmark was kind of "out of the blue", and the first paragraph could be tightened up a bit. Minor fixes in a strong piece.
Karlene Jacobsen 
02/03/09
Very good. Powerfully written.