The Official Writing Challenge
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So sad. I'm glad she could go to her parents.
Oh, a romance in the making. It's kind of quick but you handled it pretty well. Good job.

You must think I am very hard-hearted not to respond to your PM or to the thread on the bulletin board. Actually we just returned to Mozambique from UK in January and it has taken till now to get internet at home. We have just been checking mail occasionally at internet cafes, so I saw your message, but didn't get chance to reply. I was totally dumbfounded to find the whole thread a few days later on the bulletin boards.

It was never my intention to hurt or discourage you. My comment ended with a phrase that said something like 'In this way you will fulfil your potential as a writer.' That was what was in my heart, to help you grow.

Since you are not set up for PM I am leaving this as a comment on your story rather than on the bulletin board so that you don't feel I am saying publically what should be said personally.

I hope this helps.

God bless