The Official Writing Challenge
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A timely reminder—and your title is perfect. Well done.
Very provocative - very true! And your writing reflected the frantic pace of a comercialised Christmas. I was out of breath by the end!
Wonderful. The contrast between Sunday worship of Jesus and a Christmas Day of ignoring him was well done - you described it perfectly. Well done.
Ouch! Such truth is spoken here.
YOu did a wonderful job painting the picture of the contrast between what should be and what really is happening on CHristmas Day.