The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh my! What an emotional turmoil. Excellent writing. Life brings us choices just like that. Well done.
Wow! Good job. You really hooked me with this one. I liked the ending too, not quite your happily ever after.
You brought out the difficulties and complexities and left the reader hanging out for more. Well written.
The MC shift in the third paragraph confused me a bit, (maybe a string of astericks to separate?).
However, this was a sad, yet very well told story.