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I really enjoyed this wonderful story of love and forgiveness. It showed a real Child of the King!
What a wonderful story for Christmas or any other time! I enjoyed the way the Bible scriptures where woven into the story.
Good story, one we all should do our best to replay as often as needed. Good writing, too
I loved this story, especially the way you spread scripture messages throughout. I love how it was Frank and Alice who stopped to help them. And the Lord works in mysterious ways. Great job!
Very good story with scripture woven in. I'm not sure Frank, who loved Christmas, would've grunted his response about going out to fix the lights. Overall I enjoyed it, even if I was disappointed at the minister's response.
Great story of Good Samaritan rewritten for Christmas modern day! I LOVE any kind of love of enemies story turned into redemption.. Great idea and excellent execution!
Well written story. I like the scriptures woven in ... an enjoyable read
So creative, and with a message that tweaks conviction in the heart. Well done!