The Official Writing Challenge
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Great job on the demons' characters! They cracked me up. :) Calling the group a "youth group" made me think it was a church group, so I was a little thrown off that some didn't know about Jesus. But once I caught on that they were just high school youths, I got back into the story. I loved this! Fun AND a good message.
Great characterization of the demons especially. This felt like it was fun to write - great message too. Nicely done.
You had a great characterization with the demons. Their names fitted them perfectly.
Good descriptive details of characters and events. Dialogue was very natural. Really glad to see those demons get knocked down. :)