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I could feel his desperation and ache. A very realistic-feeling story and situation. Well written.
Wow! Excellent writing. It's so sad to hear stories about people losing everything at a casino. I'm glad your MC didn't take the "easy way" out.
Very well done, with a wonderful lesson woven in! Nice work. Blessings, Cheri
You've woven a wonderful message in your story. The prayer was powerful.
This is an awesome story. The message of freedom when you cry out to God with your whole heart. I love the prayer, then the way he just finds the card and exchanges it with the gambling card.

Thank you for writing.