The Official Writing Challenge
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Another "Wow" entry. Kenny's not the only genius here. Very well done.
Interesting concept of power and the value of accumulated knowledge. I enjoyed the article.
You chose a very creative way to show how powerful memories are. I enjoyed meeting little imp, Kenny.
Your characters were well written.I had a good feel for both of them. I liked the descriptions of Kenny laughing and trying to sit with his legs up and hands behind his head. Lots of interesting details!
Very clever! Much to ponder here, and that last line is PERFECT. Wow.
Loved the dialogue. I liked the way you established the relationship bewteen the two two boys. Good story.
Very clever! I really enjoyed this!
Extremely well done! I enjoyed everything about this, especially the thoughts inside Seth's head about the little twerp :)
Kenny is a very wise, if not observant young man, indeed. But then so was you MC, esp when he allowed "No matter how thick I spread that chunky peanut butter, I could never get him to stop talking, even for a few minutes." Sigh if that only could be true at times. Great story and writing.
The characterization and dialogue were very entertaining, and I enjoyed the touch of humor.