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TITLE: Not a Bother | Previous Challenge Entry
By Sally Hanan
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Dear God,
Will You give my dad a message? I think he’s up there with You ‘cos he taught me some real good stuff and I wanted to let him know that I’m doing everything he said. Tell him that I miss him. I guess he knows that anyhow.
Tell him that I love him.
I’m careful all the time-
don’t spill milk on my shirt...
THAT made him freak BIG time!
Tell him I don’t cry now;
I hold my tears in good.
I breathe real deep and wait,
just like he said I should.
Tell him I’m no sissy.
If any boy at school
tries to push me over
I punch him one-it’s cool.
No girl is gonna fool me
like Mom would do to him.
I yell at them real loud
and give my daddy’s grin.
If they shout back, my fist
will land square on their jaw…
guess that’s why I’m in Juvie
No can do that no more.
Hey God, before You leave and take care of all those other kids who need You to do them favors, I wanted to let You know…
Mom visits me and cries.
She’s such a hopeless case.
Talks to me ‘bout You God-
she says You’re full of grace.
I think it means You listen
and don’t think I’m a bother,
so that makes You my friend
and nothing like my father.
Thanks for passing on that message God. You’re the best!
Jimmy.
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Well done!
Blessings, Lynda