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05/08/08
I am so sorry you lost your sister but very glad she found God. Her life was short but it seems to have been a full one. Do you think, perhaps, there are skydivers in Heaven? lol
05/10/08
This story tugs hard at my heartstrings; ending it with a recognition that the greatest thrill of all will be to see Jesus gives it a wonderfully wrapped up finish.
05/10/08
I had to smile at the "sister was adventurous would be an absolute understatement of all time." (and I agree with that statement). :) Despite the sadness of your story you ended this with happiness, (and again I agree with this, "that the ultimate adventure for her became seeing Jesus face to face.") Your adventure is still waiting for you.
This excellent, well-written piece is a beautiful tribute to your sister's life! Her tragic death, doing what she so loved to do, is a testimony of her deep faith and trust in God echoing from an earlier time when "She exclaimed that in those moments she felt as though she were floating in the very hands of God, enveloped by His love and presence.”
Well done!
This excellent, well-written piece is a beautiful tribute to your sister's life! Her tragic death, doing what she so loved to do, is a testimony of her deep faith and trust in God echoing from an earlier time when "She exclaimed that in those moments she felt as though she were floating in the very hands of God, enveloped by His love and presence.”