The Official Writing Challenge
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Love your title and your story even more! This blessed me, I loved your last paragraph and especially the visual of glueing the shards back together and the conversation between father/daughter. So real. Excellent writing-this is a favorite of mine this week! ^_^
04/18/08
Your Doll Mender is a reflection of Jesus--the Mender of Menders. God bless you for sharing your heart.
04/18/08
This is very good. Beyond a couple of easily-fixable minor word errors, there is excellent depth of writing here -- real and good and not what I expected.
04/27/08
Sherry, I just read this and was stunned at the depth of feeling in these few words. I loved the picture of your father, and the description of your struggle as you grew and then the healing and resolution between the two of you. Thanks for sharing your heart, and your experience. Good writing. You had to dig deeply and that in itself is a true gift to the reader!