The Official Writing Challenge
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This is very creative...I like the format and I really like Rachel. I was rooting for her and hoping that she would find strength from on high. There are such short glimpses here that I wish I knew the whole story...great job! My only note is at the end, I think a typo- "in example" should be "an example"? It could just be me though-great job here! ^_^
This is real-time life. Humans are flawed, difficult, complex. What great insight you have as a writer, to see and to relate so well.
Beautifully written. I felt the pain of all involved.
Nicely done. Great capture of what is for many the reality of human relationships.
This was painful to read and I'm sure painful to write but you did a great job! Kudos.
My admiration goes out to Rachel. She is courageous and feeling and we feel her strength came from the Lord.