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Your conclusion is just exactly right for this well told story of God at work in human hearts. The "showing" actions here are particularly revealed through the humility and acceptance of God's grace of the homeless men.
That last line is priceless. Good story.
Good story with a perfect last line.
Touching, touching, touching!I was so upset with that woman and so emotional with the men. You obviuouly wrote well!
Good take on the topic. Don't we all have people like this in church? (Especially us Baptists! :P) Loved the ending!