The Official Writing Challenge
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Fascinating take on the them. An engaging story with a good lesson tucked in it as well.
This is a very creative take on the topic. I wondered if the old lady might be an angel. Good job.
This fits the topic well. My other thought was, "Don't judge a book by its cover".
Oh, what a tough call that would be-especially for a young mother in today's world, but what a blessing to miss out on! Good job.
This really touched me. The premise of the story has been told before, but you made it fresh and wonderful. I absolutely love it. It's going in my favorites.
Good story, and your ending was SO perfect. It's a shame that the child missed out on the blessing because of her mother, although it would have been more relaistic to have not had the woman ask to hold the baby.
OH, wow, this gave me goose bumps. I wonder how many blessings we miss by judging others with our own snobbishness? This one packs a powerful punch to go deeper than the surface. Thank you for blessing us with your God-given ability.