The Official Writing Challenge
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Amazing!! Absolutely amazing. I was sooo convinced of this persons evilness, until I read about the kiss (then I'm thinking how did I miss it with your title). I love your writing! have us totally fooled here! I like this different look here and where he was throwing up his dinner...for some reason that just struck me as the perfect reaction and it set everything into perspective. Nice work! ^_^
Excellent. I didn't catch who this was about until later in the piece. I suppose if I'd thought about the title, I might have come to my conclusion sooner. But there were some amazing descriptions in this piece, and you captured his voice perfectly. Really well done.
This piece is so very good. A real winner.
Just excellent - perfect title, and your characterization and POV was excellent.
Extremely creative and written with great skill.