The Official Writing Challenge
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I like the first person account. It adds a great deal of emotion to MC's voice.
You held me throughout this whole piece. Great insights and excellent writing. Pitchfork Fred indeed!!
Yes, your title is good. Your warning is a perfect illustration of the topic. Great descriptions and good work on this.
You had me engaged and captivated from beginning to end. First person is PERFECT for this piece. Very well done.
One of the finest examples of voice that I've read here. Simply excellent.
Wow. So much emotion in here! This was pretty deep, the descriptions, the words, the feelings, wow. Anyway, I liked the end, the last line especially was pretty good. Nice writing! ^_^
I love the first person POV. Great voice extremely well told. God bless.