The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed the friendship and caring nature between the two classmates...thoughtful writing.
I like the meaning of the word snail. Thanks for sharing, keep up the good words.
Your story is nicely written. You caught my interest with your "Outcast" title. The lesson within is tender and heart-warming.
Clever lesson for all of them.

A bit of the dialog seemed a touch unnatural, but that just could have been me. Nice job.