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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 - Advanced)
Topic: Valentine (05/16/05)
True Love is a gift from God.
First you give him your life and
you should be satistfied.You should
put away all the self-pity and pride.
True Love dosen't always mean with a man. True love is really when you take a hold to God's hand.True Love is
something you must abide in the rest of your life. Jesus died for you and I.
He was my First Love. He is my True Love.
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Dixie Phillips
05/23/05
Such a refreshing reminder of what true love really is! Thanks!
Maxx .
05/23/05
such truths packed into 76 dynamic words!
Val Clark
05/25/05
Indeed. You've expressed a heartfelt truth with passion in your poem.
darlene hight
05/27/05
True words!
Phyllis Inniss 
05/27/05
You can't be hurt with 'True Love'. Thanks for sharing.
Deborah Porter 
06/01/05
Hi Jessica. It is a lovely poem, but being a new member, I think that you may not have been aware that there is a minimum word count limit for Challenge entries. The minimum limit is 150 words, and the maximum is 750. Your entry came in at just 74 words and so had to be disqualified. But don't let that discourage you - believe me, there are always about five or so people who make that mistake each week, so you aren't alone. I hope you'll enter the Challenge again, but just keep those word count limits in mind as you do. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)