The Official Writing Challenge
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10/13/07
What an awesome service to be a part of! Thank you for sharing...
Laury
10/18/07
I liked this description, "I felt the ringing of the Priests’ bells, the brush of His garments and the smell of cinnamon incense."

I really like your ending and use of the name, "Ancient of Days". Very thought provoking writing! Thanks!