The Official Writing Challenge
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Very good advice here. Now to put it into practice.
A really neat devotional with a great lesson for us all. A little lengthy for my personal taste, but the humorous part about the Grizzly gave the piece its "Oomph", and thus carried through to the reader the importance of the message. Nice job plus great scripture reference.
Actually I kind of liked the Stay Clam heading - it has kind of a ring to it. :) I guess that's where the expression Clam Up came from. I too felt the comic relief to be the best part. My favorite line: 'What we normally end up doing is running away in fear, shrieking, “Oh, my heavens! We’re all gonna die!" Good devotional!
Loved this devotional. VERY well written with a super message. :) Cat
Really nice devotional. I loved your use of humor. Your writing is very good. Great message.