The Official Writing Challenge
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Often God answers prayers in an unlikely manner. The scene of Melinda marching around banging pots with Dover at her heels, is so humorous. Good job!
Your matter-of-fact style with undertones of humor made this story very readable and likable. I liked the back in the bedroom scene best - very visual to me. Good job!
This story is very exciting. If it were me, though, I'd want contact with the police! Oh, yeah. And I'd want to be sure they didn't see anything. That's the only part that got to me, however. I love mini-mysteries and the ending is perfect; God did just as she asked, and solved both problems at once!
I'm a master of giving things to God then grabbing them back. Melinda seemed to give them away ok but had trouble recognizing God's solution. I'm good at that too. I like your story. I fit in there somewhere.