The Official Writing Challenge
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Tell me more! I would like to hear more details about why you were in Romania, and what happened while you were there. It's an interesting little appetizer the way you wrote it-now I'd like the full meal deal!
The challenges of translating from language to language. You write very well and described your event in a realistic manner. I, too, would like to read more of your trip. :)
Where's the rest! Nice job. But want more. God bless.
I think the story is great as it is. A longer version would risk taking the focus away from the main theme. I particularly liked the way that you shrugged off your embarrassment and enjoyed the tea – maturity doesn’t take embarrassment half as seriously!
Not everyone can convey their thoughts and message in few words and you have been able to do this quite well. The important thing is you had your hot tea during that five-hour wait at the airport.