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How embarrassing, trying to witness to a person who already goes to your own church! Must be a REALLY large church...:) But I got your point perfectly!
As I read, I almost expected the man to be an associate pastor. Now wouldn't that be an 'oops!' Nice article, well written. :)
Nice story and you ministered your point well. Embarrassing, I agree. Good job. God bless.
I like your story, Peter in particular. He embodies almost every Christian's fear. Your title attracted me to your story, your overall presentation including the short paragraphs helped it move along well. Good job. One or two small edits and it's perfect.
Well written story. Quite an embarrassment for them not to have noticed the man and his wife before nor to have been noticed themselves. Does it tell us something about church people?
Very cute. I liked this story and the way it ended. Your descriptions of Peter's shyness were great.
As someone who has done LOTS of door-to-door, I'm glad I never did this faux pas ‚ however, I'll have to confess I had plenty of my own embarrassing moments. Nicely done.