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Lots of things going on in your story that I could comment about! The voice you gave the commentators was perfect. When you read the words, it makes you realize how sensationalized they are; better television. And the contrast between the two athletes makes your point about Who the girls should be confident in! I enjoyed reading this very much.
This was fun to read...and see where you would take us. I think you gave us a good lesson in "not boasting about tomorrow" . Thanks!
Enjoyed the commentary very much, though a bit of it sounded a bit forced. Great message nicely presented.
Very well written. I enjoyed this. The announcer's words were right on. Good job.
Great subject choice for this genre. I love gymnastics and this piece was very well written. "Love the dialogue and how you showed the wo different personalities and confidence levels. I was glad to see the humble one win.:0)