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Wow! What a beautiful testimony of God's work in the lives of your family. This is a perfect story for this topic and it's written clearly and interestingly. I truly enjoyed reading about their lives. Thanks for sharing this!
This is a story that needed to be told. I'm so glad that you wrote it and that I was priveleged to read it. How inspirational and right on topic!
This is a wonderful story emphasizing what confidence in our Lord can bring us through, and to His glory. I was clearly written, good details, and I liked how it was all wrapped up at the end. Good writing. Good job.
Wonderful story that needs to be widely told, and retold. It's an inspiration. Thanks for sharing it. Well done.
A well expressed story that inspires as well as reminds us that through Christ, all things ARE possible. Your writing showed enthusiasm,example, encouragement,endurance, and was entertaining- that's a lot in few words! So glad God called you to write, Connie
This is a winner in my book. It grips the reader from the git-go and builds to the crescendo scripture verse (one of my very favorites). On topic, on target! I love this story.
What an amazing story! Wish you'd had the words to give a bit more of his speech, but this was totally gripping. Wonderful.
Very inspirational to read!
An inspiring piece. Watch run-ons and eliminate gerunds. Powerful testimony of these people would lead many to Christ.
This title sets us up for a good story and you certainly deliver! Inspirational, I liked the story-time voice you used. There were a few missing commas in some places, I think, where a break in the sentences would've made for some smooth reading. Otherwise, well done! ^_^
Awesome testimony to God's work in these people's lives!
What an amazing story. I was captivated from the beginning.
This is so good...thank you.
What a great story. These missionaries are an inspiration. Thanks for sharing!
What a beautiful story of confidence. You did a tremendous job of presenting it all clearly and with great honor to God. I'll be checking in on more of your writing.
Oh, Mariane! What a wonderful piece you've written! I too was captivated from the very first sentence. Knowing, too, I think, the chapel Bob spoke in that you mentioned made this story all the more precious for me personally. Your skill really brought this powerfully inspiring story to life for us all!