The Official Writing Challenge
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This is awesome poetry. What a story is told in perfect verse!
Very good -- the adventure, the poetry, & the lesson!
Masterfully written, I have little else to say.
Awesome! I'm confident this is a winner.
This is incredible! Each word used is perfect and gives the reader such a descriptive picture. The writing is only surpassed by the message of the poem. Thanks.
I loved especially the italicized verses - but this whole thing is wonderful. Excellent, as usual.
Nice! I echo the comments that this is wonderful writing! My favorite verse was the one with the camel. Good job here.
Congratulations. As always, your talent amazes me!
Great work Kenn,. I sent it to a friend of mine who is struggling to keep trusting that God will bring her husband back to the reality of what he has, and she loved it.
Y'know, I don't usually go for poetry, but I like yours. Good message and style. I especially liked the stanza beginning "When pride is valued over love."
It takes a master to blend story, style and stanza with such a powerful message.

Glory goes to God, it's true;
But I give credit where it's due.