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Such creativity! You chose a difficult character but brought it to life. Wonderful!
Great story captured well in poetic form! Good job! I think this flowed nicely.
A great retelling--in poetry, no less! Wow! Excellent job! I liked the POV too, never thought of King Xerxes's POV. I enjoyed the story.
This is very good. A wonderfully told Bible story. Good job.
A wonderful story-poem, told with a bit of humor and lots of creativity.
I like this retelling. Great job giving us the king's thoughts.
A wonderful read, great job.
Fantastic -- enjoyed this sooo much!
What a neat retelling of a favorite bible story of mine! I love the format of this, and the humor.
You picked my most favorite bible story for this! I love the story of Esther and liked this new fresh POV for the king. Very vivid and story-tale flow to it. Nice!
Great retelling of a favorite story of mine! I especially like the PS's.
One of my favorite Books. Very, very nice. God bless.
Congratulations. I love this story -- and it is very cleverly done from the king's POV. Great job.