The Official Writing Challenge
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I like how you tucked in the hope he found in Jesus and how it will eventually reach every shore. Good job.
Well written with a great ending!
Wow! Awesome. Very good pace, good description that flowed so well it was like watching it instead of reading it.
This was a stunner. I judged and it was among my highest rated. Great work.
James, this is absolutely awesome, your writing gift shines, once again!
Excellent. Loved it.
This was creative and very well done. I felt the 3 fingered being was very realistic, not over the top. I felt his emotions: not easily done. Your narrative of the actions and the surroundings was masterful. Perhaps because I'm weak in that area, when people aren't, it stands out to me. I saw one spelling flaw, but, other than that, it was a tremendous Sci-fi entry. God bless!
Well done - a captivating read with great visuals and details. Congratulations!
Beautiful! I knew what the box was right away, and enjoyed watching the story play out. Well done.
Excellent job, excellent prose. You had a lot of things to describe without becoming cumbersome and really succeeded.

And your story raises an issue that has always interested me - if there are beings on other planets, have they had the 'God Experience'? If so, why? If not, why not?

Great job, James, and congrats on placing 15th overall!
I really liked the ending. (Hadn't read it last week because the title didn't really grab me, sorry.) Congrats on doing so well on the top 40/15 lists (always a treat)!