The Official Writing Challenge
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Very creative! You wrote a clever little poem with a great big message! So often the greatest lessons in life can be learned from the humblest of teachers, the little children. Very nice! Good job! Cheri
From the mouths of babes ... Well done! Good meter, great message.
This is so lovely. Being a Grandma, too, I thoroughly enjoyed the poem. And very well written.
This is precious, and makes me long for grandchildren of my own!
Wonderful poem. So true. Being a grandmother, I can relate to this. Good work.
In your beautiful poem you wrote "Now when I give my gifts to God, I carefully must choose The best of all things that I have For Him to freely use"
You have done that with this piece, thank-you for sharing this message.
Very, very sweet and easy to relate to. Excellent message. Thanks for sharing this!
I love this! It makes me want to go and hug my Nanny (grandmother). I love the little story examples and especially the rhyming meter. Very nicely done here!
Wonderful inpiration!
"Mine are the brightest of them all—" Might have to take issue with you on this! Hee Hee!