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I just love Gideon for exactly how you've written this, pretty unlikely guy! The absolute best part was about the men drinking like dogs and how God said those ones stay. Great job, I'm still smiling!
I love your characterization of Gideon. The unbathed men parts made me smile the most. Great job.
Good job of portraying Gideon. The last line is most effective.
Good stuff, but the last line was genius: "“Trumpets, empty jars, and – let’s see – torches.” The Lord smiled. “Humor me.”
OH, Oh, Oh! Loved it! I think I remember this as being true; Oh How I Wish You Had left a Scripture Reference for me to check up on it - but I think it's True. But that's okay, I'll look it up; Great Job! Loved It, Loved It, Loved It!
This is really funny! Such a good job of telling an old Bible tale.