The Official Writing Challenge
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I really enjoyed this. Last night I watched Facing the Giants and the lesson was much the same. Believable characters, great message here. Good job!
Good message here. It's never too early to learn that Jesus is a big part of your life. The characters and the dialogue were very credible.
I liked the beginning of the story. “Okay, don’t go crazy… It’s just the two of us.” This was also a cute line and realistic from a twelve-year olds perspective: “I never figured He’d know anything about football and stuff.” The story also concludes well with the boys returning to their game of football.