The Official Writing Challenge
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Very cute story - a family member, or your own?
I think it's very difficult to write true stories. You kept my attention and wrote this very well.
Good story. I would like to have seen a little more action and less telling, but a good story none-the-less.
I think this is just a delightful story. What a wonderful boyfriend Charlie turned out to be---and such a cute conclusion, that he married her to keep her from getting into trouble.
I love true stories and really enjoyed this one! It seemed a bit weak on topic, but the elements of fishing were there, so it worked. :)
Author comment: For the record, the handsome stranger was my father. Also, I must respectfully disagree with a reader who wasn't sure this was on topic. It's about FISHING! She went. She caught. :0) She is my step-mother, Marjorie Elaine. LG~