The Official Writing Challenge
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Haunting allegory. I don't understand why Master's readers have not jumped on this one. Fix the POV shifts and an edit here and there and this is a winner in my estimation. I rarely comment at level 4, but this article pulled me in. With some work I might mark it as my favorite for this topic.
This is absolutely astounding - masterful, beautiful, wonderful. The allegory is so beautiful and moving. This is definitely going in my favorites!!