The Official Writing Challenge
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Your last sentence is so true! Praise God for His working through you and your willingness to let Him.
Yes, those are the words of life we all need - straight from the quill or God. Very well communicated. Shows the humble heart of a true pastor.
Very visual - I could definitely "see" this. I must admit I was a bit distracted by a few grammar and typographical errors, but I still enjoyed this very much!
Perhaps an anecdote or one of Jesus' favorite ways of snaring people's interest - "A Parable", would enhance this little gem on writing words given by the Holy Spirit. Just that little "something extra" to make your point. Just one persons suggestion...nice job.
"So many Christians just let the Pastor be their guide and were spiritually dead."

After much prayer and tears, I left a church like that. My heart aches for those who stayed, choosing to follow man rather than God. You have a life-changing message in this piece. I wish you would expand it.