The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow. This had good pace and intrigue. Loved the mysterious atmosphere. Enjoyed the read!
Hehe -that's probably just how it feels......not that I've had to experince that.

Nice ending (despite the name boo boo -and I know that feeling all too well LOL)
I love it! It made me laugh especially at the end. Wonderful writing!
This was really a great story.
Very nice cop drama you had going on here. Great dialog and fun ending. :)
I simply loved this!
Good suprise ending. :) It was a fun story.

Excellent descripion and suspense. I was absolutely at the edge of my seat throughout! And, of course, I just loved the ending!
This is really clever! Great title, too. I enjoyed it thoroughly.
Oh, oh, oh! My favorite. Yup, this was the one:) Big smile here in CT after reading it. I might give it a different name though... No matter. A winner!
I like the feel of this piece, and the ending surprised me. It was a very good read.
Great story! I like the twist at the end.
Aweesome! Drew me right in. I don't think I breathed until I got to the end. Great unexpected ending.
Awesome read. Flowed nicely but the end was the greatest part of all! hehe - thanks for the smile and the laugh.
Very enjoyable to read. The dad's actions seemed to match well with those of the typical father. :)
Nice twist. I never saw it coming. Your dark, suspensful tale ends with a chuckle. Great work, Amy.
Haha, this was brilliantly done :) You should repost it in the articles section.
Amy, I love it!!!!!!! Oh, my parents are going to get a kick out of this one! LOL!