The Official Writing Challenge
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So sad ... and very touchingly written. Well done.
Oh, how touching! The twist you put on that letter moved this story from tender to spectacular.
You gave the reader a slice of the pain the soldiers suffer in the war and how the wounds leave them physically and emotionally. Your writing brought home vividly the injustice of war.
A sweet story well told.
The ending was so, so powerful and unexpected (to me, anyway!). Such an amazingly vivid and engaging portrait of this life. Bravo!
I felt like I was right there in the hospital with our little volunteer. I was just as surprised as she to learn that Will had no family. Great writing! Blessings, Cheri
Very real story of the volunteers that just kept working, spreading cheer and help where they could. Well done.
This is so lovely and touching. What a wonderful story and it really touched my heart. So well done. Thanks for sharing
This was so beautifully written, with a completely unexpected ending. You totally captured my attention. Bravo!
This could/should be a movie. Excellent job as always. I'm honored to of been part of your clue in hinting/hinging. This is why I love to read. God bless.
Congratulations, Ann. A beautiful haunting piece. I love the way you ended it with her getting on with the job.