The Official Writing Challenge
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Hehe This was great. Just the right touch of humor and reality. A few minor grammar errors, but they didn't detract from the story as a whole. Great job.
:) and even better the second time through.
Too funny!
Very clever and funny! Enjoyed this.
Very cute--I grinned all the way through.
Oh my! Somehow I can't see that announcement going over so well in my church! LOL But then, I don't think anyone here knows about that particular culinary treat. Working with youth takes creativity - this would certainly draw them in.
Very amusing. I can just imagine the endless puns and fun if this activity were introduced in our church. Well done. Thanks for sharing it.
This is hilarious! Thanks so much for the good laugh. I enjoyed this one very much!
Ha! I loved it. A much needed laugh as well as an enjoyable read. God bless.
This was fun and I enjoyed the interaction between Barb and Jan. :)
LOL! This was hilarious to read. I loved the character Barb and how you wrote the story. Good job (and catchy title)!
This is "but" one of the funniest pieces I've read. What an amazing way to use the topic. I hope you had as much fun writing this as I did reading it!