The Official Writing Challenge
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06/09/06
This is a very well-thought out lesson. To reach more readers, think of ways to add more "sparkle" to your lesson--a personal example, fresh ways of saying things, a touch of humor. Thank you for taking the time to present this sermonette.
06/10/06
A great sermonette and well written: however, I agree with Jan, this needs something more to keep the Reader's interest. Jesus, when teaching on earth, always used anecdotes, parables, etc, to bring home the message...which is a great way to hold the audience. Nicely done.