The Official Writing Challenge
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You made me smile all the way through!
05/12/06
Wow, bravo, right on. This is a memorable work. Thanks for sharing.
05/12/06
Nicely done and I hope so too.
05/13/06
"For you see, my little girl, is quickly becoming, a little lady."
So true, soooo true.

Great job, well written, you perfectly expressed the emotions that come with being a father. I like the how you brought the way kids of that age speak into play.
This is good writing. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks.
05/18/06
How come my eyes are stinging and my nose needs blowing? Would that every little girl had such a proud daddy, that could put his love into words the way you have. Obviously writing from your heart (you know the secret),you certainly touch the heart of your reader! Thank you.