The Official Writing Challenge
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This is so incredible. I loved the truth and the beauty that you write with.
03/16/06
A good message of hope here. A few too many switches in the early stanzas between the "you" and "I" POV, but it all straightened out at the end. Good job.
03/16/06
The first line caught my attention and I read throughout. Switching between "I" and "you" was confusing, but this is a nice poem.