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Topic: STRESSED - Begins January 18 / Ends January 25 (01/18/18)
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TITLE: Compressed | Previous Challenge Entry
By Dorothy MOFFITT
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As it impinges on our life.
Makes a dent in material things
or gets us into strife.
A stressed person has problems
to cope with in her life,
she needs the help of Jesus,
who knows what it is like.
Metal is stressed to
make it stronger in the end.
When pressure beats upon it,
it will not readily bend.
A stressed cloth is beaten
to make it look so old,
when the ragged garment
means admittance to the fold.
Stress is a problem in our
tough impatient age.
When pressure builds upon us,
we feel we're in a cage.
She likes to sit alone
gazing at a scene,
to let nature heal her.
till her life is now serene.
Music soothes the troubled
breast if it is played softly,
its sound resonates on the ears
and makes peace offaly.
Turn your eyes on Jesus
He will give you peace,
take away the stress,
and your worries cease.
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I did feel there was a bit of a disconnect between the comparisons of the stress of objects and the stress of people. In the stress of objects there was a message that experiencing stress can actually make you stronger, but when you switched back to the idea of people experiencing stress, the focus was on making the stress go away rather than experiencing and pushing through it.
I did feel there was a bit of a disconnect between the comparisons of the stress of objects and the stress of people. In the stress of objects there was a message that experiencing stress can actually make you stronger, but when you switched back to the idea of people experiencing stress, the focus was on making the stress go away rather than experiencing and pushing through it.
Blessings~