The Official Writing Challenge
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Powerful!
I'm not an expert at poetry, but your words touched my heart. The first part seemed different from the ending. Your message is a strong one and one I often need reminding of.
03/09/17
Congratulations on your 2nd place finish in the Intermediate category, Caleb.

Your poem is a great reminder of the frailty of life.

Was your wife really in the ICU? If so, I hope she made it home in time for Christmas.