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Topic: JAM (02/09/17)
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TITLE: Jams are gems! | Previous Challenge Entry
By Caleb Cheong
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ADD TO MY FAVORITES
between two solid rocks
I would not give up hope;
I know whom I believe
Should my hand be jammed
in the spoilt door
I would not be panic;
You won't leave or forsake
Although I am jammed
like the suitcase with clothing
I will never despair;
I know You are my timely help
I may be in a jam
or a predicament
I will stand firm and wait
patiently for rescue
I would still praise You
if I were caught in a jam
in a free way
I knew You have a plan
Jams are God-sent indeed
If my God reigns
whatever situations
I'm in; I will trust Him
Jams are God's special gems
They are meant for my good
:to hone and help me shine
I may be more like Christ
His promises hold true
Peace reigns through stormy seas
Crystal clear are His Word
; His very gracious deeds
Surely I will not fear
At times I may pass through
the dark valleys of jams
The Lord's my Good Shepherd
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I loved it.
Blessings~
I loved how your related the word jam to various situations you find yourself in. Then showed how God uses them for our good.
The only tad bit of red ink is...you might want to check to see if your spaces in your sentences came through okay.
You have two semi-colons that got stuck in the beginning of your sentences.
Comfort and peace are the rewards.