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05/12/12
Beautiful! I loved this entry and the way the Lord salvaged their marriage...making her husband a "new creature" thereby freeing him to be a better husband/man.

I felt the MC's pain and joy at once. Great job. Well written. Thank you.

God Bless,

Camille~

This is a lovely devotion. Often I don't like it when a reader asks questions like you did in the beginning because it can come off as preachy. But you managed to make me feel like you were looking just me alone right in the eye and confirming what you saw in my eyes. I felt like you really cared about me. I think sharing your personal story helped with that. I felt a connection and left with a spark of hope.