The Official Writing Challenge
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12/01/11
This was truly interesting, and I enjoyed the "downloading" of the word as part of your story.

Good job- God Bless you~
12/03/11
This is an interesting take on the topic. However, I don't quite get the very last sentence. I'm not sure "how a Christian interprets" God's Word" is "fulfilling of all scriptures".

I liked the visual of the celestial messenger coming in a whisper.

God bless.
This is a nice devotion. I know it is no coincidence that it fits what is going on in my life right now. It was almost like you were eavesdropping on a conversation I had with my son last night. God is good!
12/12/11
I liked the message in the piece - the downloading from the Lord as we upload praises and worship.

I sense there was a deeper message here that I'm not sure came across. Also, I agree with Jennifer, the ending left me a bit puzzled as I wasn't sure how it fir with the overall piece.

But a nice job overall. Keep writing!