The Official Writing Challenge
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10/28/10
I truly enjoy the adventures of Kurt and Ramone. You do a great job of keeping them on topic. God Bless.
This is beautifully done. I can really see the love and passion in these words
10/31/10
An easy-going letter, a fun read.

I think it'd be stronger without Ramone (and Louisa) in the letter--just the two main characters, the letter-writer and his wife.

The letter-writer's love for his Crystal is very evident.