The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved this. Doesn't Satan love to play mind games. You covered the challenge beautifully. Thank you for sharing and God bless.
I wasn't sure at first what was going on but then I reread it and think I figured it out. You did a good jobs with the descriptions and included great Bible verses.
09/16/10
Love the descriptions and the enthusiasm

But I am not really sure what this is all about.

Must be something to do with satan, which is a very scary thought!
09/16/10
Great job on such a creative reminder to captivate our thoughts with scripture. Congratulations on your 3rd place.
09/16/10
Love the creativity here. This is so well done!
Creative story! Like some others mentioned, I was a little fuzzy on what was going on some of the time, and I noticed a few grammatical errors, but fun story.
Love the action-packed pace of this story! I didn't understand the all of the nuances of the game show, but obviously the judges did! :) The story had a good flow--even tho I was a little lost, I didn't want to stop reading. Congratulations on placing 2nd in your level!!