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01/31/10
I love your image of going outside and hearing the chorus of crickets. We so take our senses for granted, until we lose them. Thanks for that lovely reminder!
Good story. It makes one appreciate our blessings.
02/03/10
Thank you for defining Dad's emotions as he presented the beer and cigarettes to the boys. Nicely done.
It's funny how sometimes we can let pride stand in our way. I do it way too much. To think you almost missed something as beautiful as a song of the crickets. Nice piece, well-written with a direct message.